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The Dead City
A poem of Human fault
Monotonous and non-descript
a city lost to time
The vessels of this ancient heart
are riddled deep with crime.
steel and glass infringes
on long dead mason’s legacy
and men who dwell the day by day
forget why they are free.
Hardened passers roll their eyes
at faces wide in wonder
coldly cynical to the past
that fades as fast as thunder
the magic found in stories lost
now deaf to the ghosts of the land
and the city dwindles down to something
blankly sterile and bland
Heroes forgotten~
now tired of remembering
they condemn these towers of history
and the symbols are lost with age
they build on top of memories
believing they are sage
Memory fades~
Forgotten and assumed
apathy expected
till something in the answer brings
up a... newer... question
or the icy tears that clad the enigma
of an emotion cast in steel
or the hidden writing on granite walls
is proved to be more real
than ink scrawled in a text book-
percentages and graphs.
A reality thrust upon us
in the chiseled eyes of wraiths.
The dead resurrected~
so this lover lost in tide of war
never to come home
turns the faded script on ebony walls
to something more than stone.
Alive in memory~
Dedicated to the people of Washington D.c.
A poem of Human fault
Monotonous and non-descript
a city lost to time
The vessels of this ancient heart
are riddled deep with crime.
steel and glass infringes
on long dead mason’s legacy
and men who dwell the day by day
forget why they are free.
Hardened passers roll their eyes
at faces wide in wonder
coldly cynical to the past
that fades as fast as thunder
the magic found in stories lost
now deaf to the ghosts of the land
and the city dwindles down to something
blankly sterile and bland
Heroes forgotten~
now tired of remembering
they condemn these towers of history
and the symbols are lost with age
they build on top of memories
believing they are sage
Memory fades~
Forgotten and assumed
apathy expected
till something in the answer brings
up a... newer... question
or the icy tears that clad the enigma
of an emotion cast in steel
or the hidden writing on granite walls
is proved to be more real
than ink scrawled in a text book-
percentages and graphs.
A reality thrust upon us
in the chiseled eyes of wraiths.
The dead resurrected~
so this lover lost in tide of war
never to come home
turns the faded script on ebony walls
to something more than stone.
Alive in memory~
Dedicated to the people of Washington D.c.
This is one of my favorite poems.... Seriously, critique is WELCOME, just be polite.
I went to Washington last year, and I was struck with the idea that these people don't appriciate what they're standing on.
I bet, if you see something every day, you start to take it for granted.
So this was the idea that something beautiful and timeless fades and dies as it's forgotten.
Thank god for the people who ask questions.
There's a few references to monuments--Vietnam wall among them.
Y'know, I'd never seen snow before I went there....
I went to Washington last year, and I was struck with the idea that these people don't appriciate what they're standing on.
I bet, if you see something every day, you start to take it for granted.
So this was the idea that something beautiful and timeless fades and dies as it's forgotten.
Thank god for the people who ask questions.
There's a few references to monuments--Vietnam wall among them.
Y'know, I'd never seen snow before I went there....
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Kewl~! your very good at poem