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I have become what I most hated
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They’d tell me I came second,

“Talented, but not as good”

Though now I’m nearly worshiped,

They never understood!

(It only took a clan to die)

And it was already too late

by the time that I was seen.

When the king is ghastly cold,

Ev’ry girl wants to be the queen.

Dead heart, dying soul-

Somehow they cannot see

What is so alien and out of reach

Is crystal clear to me


Backstabber, you don’t know the half!

I will live for you,

My hate alone will feed this body

Keep me coming through-

Pain! Loath! Ever present

Dust of happy times!

I will live to torture you

In payment for your crimes!

Dead heart, dying soul-

Somehow they cannot see

What is so alien and out of reach

Is crystal clear to me


Love and hate so close- and far! though

Neither opposite

Both call for retribution

My right as I claimed it,

The day you ripped my heart away,

When my love betrayed my trust

And never will I love again!

Though I can’t deny I’ll feel lust…

Dead heart, dying soul-

Somehow they cannot see

What is so alien and to them that watch

Is crystal clear to me


I have become what I most hated,

In order to destroy

-Though he will seek to stop me,

With one final, desperate ploy

Even my angel cannot rebuild

The burnt and broken heart.

I will leave, and steel my soul

So I can play the part-

But it wasn’t all meaningless
So the other day, I was thinking about how during the course of the series Sasuke starts to become more and more like itachi, like he is so fixated on the thing he hates most that it consumes and eventualy replaces him. I was trying to convey that, but it didn't really work.

This is written like a song, with verses and chorus.

-kyo-chichan wanted me to post more poetry.... But this isn't what I'm posting for her. I don't think she watches Naruto. I'll post better stuff for her <3
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Kyoichi-chan's avatar
Eeeee...

;3;

I really didn't watch much more Naruto after Sasuke Kicked his ass. But I have heard a lot about it...and that sounds EXACTLY like it.

Ilu.

8D

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